I just suggested that the focal point (the eye) seemed too close to the centre of the image, that seems to make the viewer’s eye wander around rather than get dragged in. I think with a bit cropped off the left and a bit off the bottom it would be a more pleasing image.
I just suggested that the focal point (the eye) seemed too close to the centre of the image, that seems to make the viewer’s eye wander around rather than get dragged in. I think with a bit cropped off the left and a bit off the bottom it would be a more pleasing image.
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@ MAtt - thanks , what do you think if I cropped it more from the right - crop out all those wrinkles?? Let me try, will bmail you the new one.
ReplyDeleteI actually really like this. The eye was the very first thing that I looked at, the eyelashes. I really like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam, I have decided to keep it like this. I did try two different crops and they both come out so nicely.
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